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You wrote an intimate scene that should be working. But it's not.
Maybe the pacing drags. Maybe the emotional connection isn't there. Maybe it feels mechanical or awkward or like your characters are reading from a script. Whatever it is, you know it's not ready — and you need help.
Send me your scene. I'll either give you detailed revision notes that show you exactly how to fix it, OR I'll rewrite it with track changes so you can see the difference.
We'll focus on sensory details that pull readers in, emotional beats that deepen the connection, and making sure your characters' voices shine through. This isn't about making it "hotter", it's about making it work for YOUR story and YOUR characters.
WHAT YOU GET:
Detailed revision notes OR a full rewrite with track changes (your choice)
Focus on sensory details, emotional connection, and character voice
One round of revision feedback to make sure you nail it
This is hands-on. This is personalized. This is your scene, but better.
Perfect for romance authors who need immediate help fixing a scene that's not working.
You wrote an intimate scene that should be working. But it's not.
Maybe the pacing drags. Maybe the emotional connection isn't there. Maybe it feels mechanical or awkward or like your characters are reading from a script. Whatever it is, you know it's not ready — and you need help.
Send me your scene. I'll either give you detailed revision notes that show you exactly how to fix it, OR I'll rewrite it with track changes so you can see the difference.
We'll focus on sensory details that pull readers in, emotional beats that deepen the connection, and making sure your characters' voices shine through. This isn't about making it "hotter", it's about making it work for YOUR story and YOUR characters.
WHAT YOU GET:
Detailed revision notes OR a full rewrite with track changes (your choice)
Focus on sensory details, emotional connection, and character voice
One round of revision feedback to make sure you nail it
This is hands-on. This is personalized. This is your scene, but better.
Perfect for romance authors who need immediate help fixing a scene that's not working.