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Your spicy scenes aren't landing the way you hoped.
You know what needs to happen physically. You've read enough romance to know the mechanics. But when you sit down to write it, something's off. The tension feels forced. The chemistry reads flat. You're either writing too clinical or drowning in purple prose, and you can't find that sweet spot where heat meets heart.
Your beta readers are polite about it. But you know something's missing.
This is a 60-minute session where we talk honestly about what's working and what's not in your intimate scenes.
Bring me your spicy scenes. I'll give you specific, actionable feedback on tension, pacing, word choice, and emotional connection. We'll talk about how to escalate heat across your series so every book feels fresh. And I'll give you guidance tailored to YOUR subgenre — because spice in small-town romance hits different than mafia romance or sports romance.
WHAT YOU GET:
Honest feedback on your current intimate scenes
Specific notes on tension, pacing, language, and emotional beats
Guidance on escalating heat across your series without being repetitive
Subgenre-specific tips that actually work for your voice and story
No generic advice. Just real talk about how to write intimacy that makes readers feel everything.
Perfect for romance authors who know their spicy scenes need work but don't know how to fix them.
Your spicy scenes aren't landing the way you hoped.
You know what needs to happen physically. You've read enough romance to know the mechanics. But when you sit down to write it, something's off. The tension feels forced. The chemistry reads flat. You're either writing too clinical or drowning in purple prose, and you can't find that sweet spot where heat meets heart.
Your beta readers are polite about it. But you know something's missing.
This is a 60-minute session where we talk honestly about what's working and what's not in your intimate scenes.
Bring me your spicy scenes. I'll give you specific, actionable feedback on tension, pacing, word choice, and emotional connection. We'll talk about how to escalate heat across your series so every book feels fresh. And I'll give you guidance tailored to YOUR subgenre — because spice in small-town romance hits different than mafia romance or sports romance.
WHAT YOU GET:
Honest feedback on your current intimate scenes
Specific notes on tension, pacing, language, and emotional beats
Guidance on escalating heat across your series without being repetitive
Subgenre-specific tips that actually work for your voice and story
No generic advice. Just real talk about how to write intimacy that makes readers feel everything.
Perfect for romance authors who know their spicy scenes need work but don't know how to fix them.